Watching People Negative Description

     Once again, I found myself sitting outside surrounded by people I hardly know.  Watching people I don't know at all.  A photographer was bothering people taking pictures and asking questions.  A few flat, green, metal benches down, some unlucky people were fighting against the constantly blowing wind to keep their papers in order while they read them.  The heat beating down on everyone outside was getting to be unbearable as several of them wiped the wet sweat off their foreheads.  Students plod out the doors, looks of worry across their faces as they wonder if they will pass this quarter or even understand what they just learned.   A large, disgusting beetle of some unknown kind landed on my notebook interrupting me from my observations.  It couldn't even show courtesy as it landed on its back after flying through the air.

Watching People Positive Description

     There I was, sitting outside.  Surrounded by friends.  Observing the people and events around me.  One one side, we have a smiling, red haired photographer taking pictures for whatever project she was working on.  She engaged in polite conversation to everyone she added to her roll.  Down the row of shining green benches, others sat quietly in contemplation as they studied their papers in the warm sunlight with the breeze blowing gently behind them.  Students walk out the doors, looks of contemplation as they leave with the new knowledge they gained today.  A bug flies lazily through the air before setting down gently on my notebook.  It soon took an unscheduled flight as I flicked it through the air with a hidden smile on my face.

Trick # 9

     Creative practice.  In this trick, I was asked to look at two advertisements and define what I thought about and saw in both.  The first advertisement was for a Saab car which was given the likeliness of an aircraft going down the highway.  To resemble a plane, the cars doors are open to give the idea of wings as well as the car moving quite fast.  The car itself will appeal to readers who, like me, love speed shown by the car moving down the runway extremely fast giving the appearance that it was about to take off.   The title of the advertisement was below and read "Air-crafted" as if the car was made tougher than a normal vehicle.  The phrase also represents that the car was designed to be faster and more aero-dynamic because it was invented by aeronautical engineers.  Overall it definitely comes across as a sports car.

     The second advertisement shows the highly recognized face of Kermit the frog in the foreground while the vehicle, a Ford Escape Hybrid is sitting in the background on top of a mountain.  This could possibly give the appeal to children as well as the adults who remember watching Muppets while growing up.  It does seem funny though that while trying to sell the SUV, the advertisement doesn't really give much info about it.  Almost as if it was secondary in nature (no pun intended).  Kermit is given a phrase, "I guess it is easy being green", which to most people would be kinda funny to attract the attention of the passerby.  So here we have an SUV sitting in a natural setting, overlooking a mountain pass, while dirt and bushes abound in the picture and Kermit is advertising the eco-friendly side of the vehicle.

     Interesting that both cars are played off of what makes them unique, because it wouldn't work the other-way around.  You wouldn't get the same message if you had a Muppet talking about the Saab on a mountain, nor would you get any message of seeing an eco-friendly SUV on a runway.  All in all though, both advertisements priority is to play to your appeal and get your attention fast so that you read each one carefully.  The Saab, while fast, powerful, and sleek, has a black overtone to play on the fact that people relate dark with power, rebellion, temptation and mystery.  The Ford on the other hand, has a colorful outlook, with nature, frogs, mountains and a very blue sky.  The over all tone ends in a bright outlook that grabs peoples attention with its cartoon like behavior.  Both, mystery and humor grab peoples attentions.  They obviously know what they are doing.

Trick number 8. My first essay.

I added the comics in this discussion at the bottom since my actual printed essay will look entirely different.

Don’t Ask, Don’t Tell was a large debate over the prejudices in America’s history.  In both this cartoon by Jill Parker and the second cartoon by Steve Greenberg.  Both comics deal with a very serious issue of the “Don’t Ask, Don’t Tell” repeal that happened recently.  While, for the most part, Americans don’t think about this policy since it doesn’t affect the civilian population, this policy has in the past and up until recently affected our soldiers on many levels.  Both artists send the same message that soldiers really didn’t care about the policy in the first place.  That to them, the most important factor was that they are a soldier first before everything.  They have an important job that cannot be interfered with petty things.

In the first cartoon, by Jill Parker, you have a decorated soldier stating that after everything was said, all the changes made, that they can finally be who they want to be, a soldier.  It’s possible that this cartoon soldier is also saying that because the policy was repealed, he no longer has to worry about hiding his sexuality from his superiors.  That now, he can focus on being the soldier he wants to be.  Maybe hiding was causing him to not “Be all that you can be".  It’s quiet possible this is the effect that many soldiers are having.  So by repealing the policy, they can finally focus on the more important things.  With the smile on the soldier’s face, he is relieved and happy with it.  The soldier’s words also show pride.  He’s proud of what he does.  He’s proud that his country, the country he is serving is moving beyond basic prejudices albeit slowly.
The second cartoon, by Steve Greenberg reflects the message of the first one by showing us two coffins draped with the American flag.  It goes on to show us that neither person cared about the others sexuality even to the end of their lives.  This is a powerful image in and of itself.  The one soldier shows that he didn’t ask.  He felt that it did not matter about a persons sexuality as long as they stand shoulder to shoulder.  The other shows that he “Didn’t Tell” because he felt that he doesn’t need to.  He’s performing his duty all the way to the end.

One more aspect of this image is that the American flag is showed prominently by taking up a large section of the comic.  This represents a few things.  It shows that our country is again, moving beyond simple prejudices and seeing everyone as equal regardless of race, sex, or preferences.  They are even in both their countries and their own eyes.  Both coffins are side by side.  They stood shoulder to shoulder together in life and now in death.  I was asked about the encroaching shadows but actually, when I see them now, I prefer and believe that they are in fact, receding.  This repeal is brightening our view on the subject.  And these two in the image are leading the way.  The old beliefs are being pushed away with the shadows of our past.

Another point that this image makes is that they might not be coffins.  They could be statements showing that now, America has split the policy in two.  On one hand, the box on the right “Didn’t Tell” because there was no need for it.  It’s a persons freedom to live the life they want to live.  They should never be subjected to the prejudice or judging of others.  So on this hand, you have a persons freedom.  On the other, you have the newer view not asking in the first place. That finally, America is realizing that it doesn’t matter.  It doesn’t change who the person is, or what they are doing so there is no reason to ask.  Accept who people are and move on.  This definitely reinforces the view of the shadows retreating as it represents our country moving on and becoming all the better for it.

The shadows are also representing something besides showing how our country is improving.  They also serve to focus the readers attention on the subject at hand.  By using a neutral color, the tan, for a background and the black of the shadow for the outer edges, this emphasizes on the objects themselves.  And by giving them the bright colors of the red, white, and blue of the flags, that just pushes it even further.  Given that the messages written at the bottom of each flag are in black and white, this just all but screams out for your attention.  Showing that this is a very important subject that every reader should know exists.

The subject at hand, the policy that split our military into factions has caused problems in the past.  When this policy first came into being, December 21, 1993, almost 14,000 soldiers were discharged under the category of homosexuality as reported by http://www.military.com/news/article/2011/dont-ask-dont-tell-policy-is-history.html.  This was something that showed the narrowness of our country in a time where we should have been showing the world why we are the best country in it.  We should have been striving to be standing on top and yet we allowed ourselves to fall from grace.  It would be almost 18 years, and 3 Presidents before we corrected our stance on this.  While a step forward in the right direction, it is still only one of many other problems our country still has.  But this shows we know how, and can, take the right path.





Since I have almost 12 years in the military, I thought it would be good if I included my view on the policy itself.  I never agreed with the policy itself.  From day one, it slaps the Constitution in the face.  It blatantly encroaches onto every American’s rights to live the lives they want to live without judgment.  It goes against everything our country has told and showed the world that we are about.  From my experience, it doesn’t matter what your sexual preference is, as long as your willing to do your duty, as long as your willing to stand shoulder to shoulder, as long as your willing to stand up for what you believe your country is about and watch my back while I watch yours, I don’t care.  It’s as simple as that.  I found both these cartoons to be very close to the truth as far as I see it.  Most soldiers don’t care if your gay or not.  Fortunately most of us have moved beyond it.  We understand the importance of our job.  We understand that our training gives us an advantage that most civilians never see.  Or understand.  We spend a lot of time beside everyone we serve with and this has allowed us to move on.

Unfortunately America is a big place with a lot more people in it than our military.  So its going to take a long time for the rest of the country to catch up.  Ultimately I agree with the first cartoon.  It doesn’t matter.  All that matters was I was a soldier, like him, and I’m proud of it.  The second cartoon is something I believe represents our country.  It’s evolving.  It’s changing.  And so far, for the better.  I realize that our country has bigger problems, but one small step at a time.  Allowing gay people to openly serve shows how much we’ve improved and maybe one day the rest of the world will follow in our steps.

This is one subject that every American, civilian or military, should take notice of.  One that they should take part of and strive to understand.  And in the end, we need to keep those shadows away.  Keep the light bright and always be moving forward to improve this great country that we all share.

Trick # 7 part 2.

The whole “Don’t Ask, Don’t Tell” policy was started on December 21, 1993 and ended on September 20, 2011 after President Obama, Secretary of Defense Leon Panetta and Admiral Mike Mullen which set the end of “Don’t Ask, Don’t Tell”.  The policy was designed so that gay soldiers could not openly join the military but at the same time prevented military personnel from discriminating or asking about a soldiers sexual preference.  The policy was originally formulated in 1981 under the Department of Defense titled under the Directive 1332.14.  According to http://psychology.ucdavis.edu/rainbow/html/military_history.html

Nearly 17,000 men and women were discharged under the category of homosexuality.   Both comics done by Jill Parker and the second by Steve Greenberg both show cases that our soldiers ultimately don’t care about the policy.  They don’t care what your sexual preference is.  It’s ultimately about serving with the soldier next to you.  Putting your life in their hands.  They have a job to do and it’s important for the mission and our country that they do it.

Trick #7

Common denom.  --  The don’t ask don’t tell policy and a soldiers view of it

Thesis – our thesis is on the American military policy of Don’t Ask, Don’t Tell.  They share a point of view that not every American soldier cares about the sexuality of others. 

1. Observations:  Soldiers don’t care about serving with other people with different sexual preferences

2. Both cartoons focus on the subject of the American militaries “Don’t Ask, Don’t Tell” policy and the soldiers viewpoints.

3. How do we know this?    Cartoon #1, the soldier is declaring that above all else, no matter the situation, he is an American soldier first.  Cartoon #2, shows two coffins with signs stating Didn’t ask and the other shows didn’t tell.  The flags on the coffins show that they were americans that gave their lives not caring about the policy.

5.  What do we find interesting about these cartoons?  We find it interesting that the soldiers don’t appear to care about the policy on the same level that politicians or civilians do.  The soldiers understand that you have to serve with one another and will put your life in their hands.  They understand the importance of not allowing this policy to interfere with their job.

How does it tap into larger social or cultural issues?  There has always been controversy between having gay or straight people serving in the military.  Hate crimes have always been uncommon within the country. 

Thesis --   The two cartoons both share a common idea that the average military person does not care about the “Don’t Ask, Don’t Tell” policy.  That it does not matter what your sexual preference is. When you decide to serve, you serve as an American soldier.  And that no matter if you are gay or straight, when you enter the military and you die, you die an American citizen.

Trick # 6

  

Topic:   Don’t ask, Don’t tell.

Story:  The cartoon shows two caskets draped in American flags.  The story shows that neither soldier that gave their lives, cared about the others sexual preference. 

Audience:  The cartoon was produced in Los Angeles, California.  It was published on the author’s website.  The cartoon was conservative in nature.

Author:  Steve Greenberg is an editorial artist who has won awards or honors nearly every year.  They include runner-up in the 2008 Fischetti Editorial Cartoon Competition as documented in http://greenberg-art.com/About_the_artist.html

Argument:  The message of the cartoon is showing that even though both soldiers laid their lives down for their country and each other, they didn’t care if one of them was gay.    This is implied by one of the coffins stating “Didn’t ask”

Composition:  This cartoon is a single frame image.

Word and Image:  This cartoon is a hybrid that relies on both image and text.  The text shows that the two soldiers don’t care about the Don’t Ask, Don’t Tell policy, and the image refers to them giving their lives for their country.

Imagery:  The drawings are realistic as they are meant to show seriousness.

Tone:  The comic is entirely serious as it shows the nature of the subject and the cost of it.

Character and setting:  The components show two objects, both coffins.  There is no other way to break them down.  The flags draped over them show they were military.

Cultural Resonance:  This cartoon refers to the recent repeal of the Don’t Ask, Don’t Tell repeal of this year.  The symbols used in this cartoon show that the soldiers don’t care.  The audience would be narrow as it only applies to our military.